What do you think of this sentence to start a chapter:
“I met my future ex-husband at the wedding of my sister to her future ex-husband.”
Mouthful? Hmm.
I kinda like it.
July 25, 2007 by Jane
What do you think of this sentence to start a chapter:
“I met my future ex-husband at the wedding of my sister to her future ex-husband.”
Mouthful? Hmm.
I kinda like it.
As a chapter start, not bad. I feel kind of like I’ve heard it before, or heard the “I met my future ex” part before–maybe in some short stories I was reading last weekend. But as a chapter start, that bothers me less than as a book start.
I’ll play with it. I think it may sound too busy though. But those are two things I want to get right out there — that this character and her sister are both divorced.